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Copywriting Examples Incite Rebellion

Copywriting Examples Use Rebellion

Copywriting Examples-How Rebellion Boosts Sales


“You don’t tell me what to do!”

Those were the exact words my 9 year old mouth screamed at my dad, just seconds before I found out how naive I was.

We all have a little rebel inside us.

As kids, we can’t wait to break free from rules and expectations to do things our own way. For most of us, that bright spark of rebellion dims as we grow older. As we become “more responsible”.

But deep down, where some of the most powerful urges and emotions are supressed, we all still crave those opportunities to break conventions, defy the status quo, make our own path and “stick it to The Man!”.

“Sure. What the hell!”

Savvy marketers tap into this powerful,  innate human desire for rebellion.

Positioning their brand as an alternative, the underdog, or challenger to the mainstream. They entice us to buy in and be part of a movement against the grain.

From 7Up to Apple, some of history’s most successful ad campaigns leveraged this rebellious spirit to drive brand growth and boost sales. To great success.

What makes these rebellion-based campaigns so effective?

More importantly, how WE can use those lessons to infuse a spirit of constructive rebellion into our own marketing efforts?

Copywriters Tap Into the Urge to Break Rules

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Rules were meant to be broken. As kids, we heard this message constantly from peers, popular media, even indirectly from the very parents who set boundaries we couldn’t wait to cross.

The urge to break rules and expectations is strong in childhood and adolescence. But it doesn’t disappear entirely as we become adults. We still crave opportunities to color outside the lines, break convention, and forge our own path. Especially if we can do it in the company of similar rebellious others – as a group.

Smart marketers realize this and position rule-breaking behaviors as a way to satisfy our inner rebel.

Here’s a great example:

7Up – “The Uncola”

7Up branded itself as the “Uncola” in the 1970s campaign. They positioned the brand as a rebel upstart challenging Coke and Pepsi’s grip on the soda market.

The underdog narrative let 7Up and their un-brown, clear, refreshing lemon-lime soda carve out a niche as the anti-establishment soda of choice. Ultimately securing the #3 position in a very crowded (and profitable) soft drink market.

Copywriters Position Brand as an Underdog

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Rooting for the underdog is natural for most of us. We inherently support those taking on the dominant powers, overcoming the odds stacked against them.

This goes all the way back to the story of David and Goliath. Brands that successfully frame themselves as an underdog alternative to a mainstream industry giant can leverage this to great effect.

Avis – “We Try Harder”

Up against the huge juggernaut, Hertz Rent-A-Car in the 1960s, Avis smartly embraced their underdog status. Their “We Try Harder” campaign by ad agency, DDB (Doyle-Dane-Benbach) appealed to consumers who wanted an alternative to the complacency and entitled nature of Hertz. This marketing strategy proved a huge win for Avis.

Copywriters Empower Rebellion Against Convention

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Rebellion isn’t always negative. Rebelling against outdated conventions, broken systems, and restrictive stereotypes can empower change and progress. Brands that tap into this change-enabling spirit of rebellion can build strong connections.

Apple – “Think Different”

Apple revived its famous rebel campaign in the early 2000s but shifted the context. This time, positioned as empowering rebels who challenged conventions and changed the world through innovation. The ads made Apple computers tools for real, positive change.

Apple continues to this day to be the alternative choice (against Android phones) with the iPhone. Apple users as a worldwide group or “cult” comprise one of the most loyal groups of repeat brand buyers in history.

It should come as no surprise that the company was founded on Steve Jobs own “rebellious” personality. This powerful positioning and consistency of message has led Apple to become one of the biggest, most profitable companies of all time.

Copywriters Fan the Flames of Youth Rebellion

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As we grow up, rebellion often manifests as teens actively rejecting parental values and preferences in a quest to forge their own identity. Brands that embed themselves early into this youth rebellion dynamic can earn lifelong affinity.

Volkswagen – “Think Small” 

This minimalist ad campaign by Doyle Dane Bernbach positioned the small Volkwagon Beetle as a rebel against bloated, oversized American cars. Sales went from 2k in 1960 to 400k per year by 1970. Helmut Krone conceived the ad and inspired rebellious, 1960’s hippies everywhere to buy the now iconic Beetle Bugs and later the VW busses.

Copywriters Disrupt and Challenge the Dominant Player

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Sometimes the most straight-forward rebellious move is to position your brand as a disruptive alternative to the lead player. Against the fat, arrogant king who is complacent atop the market. Consumers love to rally behind the rebel working to dethrone the king.

Federal Express – “When It Absolutely, Positively Has to Be There Overnight”

FedEx’s campaign focused on their reliability of overnight delivery, enticing rebellious business customers away from the slower and often unreliable postal services. It propelled FedEx’s growth by tapping into the professionals urgency to rebel against slow, outdated, unaccountable delivery systems.

Dollar Shave Club

With its viral 2012 video, Dollar Shave Club challenged the dominance of overpriced razor giants like Gillette. It disrupted the market by appealing to economically rebellious customers,  eager for an affordable, no-frills alternative. This strategy worked to great success for Dollar Shave and can be adapted for almost any product.

Trump

Our collection wouldn’t be complete without a mention of Donald J Trump.

This real estate developer, “The Apprentice” TV star, and a contentious celebrity figure inspired a nation not so long ago to rebel against the status quo in Washington, DC – and vote him in as President of The United States of America.

While many are appalled by his braggadocious personality, his tactics, and his policies, few can dispute the effectiveness of calling upon the rebellious nature of humanity to acheive his ultimate goal.

He sold a nation on rebellion.

Ultimately though, he went too far in his bid for re-election. Trump now finds himself entangled in a multitude of serious legal battles stemming from the re-election insurrection.

Rebellion is a powerful motivating force. Safe and effective when used properly, like fire or electricity. But when handled carelessly, can lead to catastrophic results.

Key Takeaways On Using Rebellion in Copywriting

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Rebellion is a powerful psychological force across all life stages. When incorporated authentically, and ethically it can dramatically boost a marketing campaign’s effectiveness.

Some key tips:

– Align with specific types of rebellion that resonate with your target audience. Youth, women, professionals etc. may be motivated by different rebellious desires. Understand these desires.

Many use The Copywriter’s Persuasion Toolkit  to uncover even the deepest, hidden desires of a target market.

– Don’t force it. Rebellion only works when integrated into campaigns organically and sincerely. Avoid pushing rebellion where it doesn’t belong.

– Lead customers to rebel only FOR your brand. You don’t want to inspire a counter rebellion simultaneously against it.

Rebellion should empower people towards your brand, not alienate an equivalent faction  through overly polarizing messages.

Show your prospect what’s possible. A transformation for the better. Give them a choice. Show them how choosing you can be the better alternative.

Next time you create a campaign, consider opportunities for incorporating the powerful spirit of rebellion. Rebellion can be a powerful tool, when used appropriately in a marketing campaign.

It may, in fact, be the key ingredient which disrupts your entire  industry and advances your marketing success.

Need a full compliment of tools for the copywriter?

The Copywriter’s Persuasion Toolkit will help you get the job done right.

To your success!

– Robert Schwarztrauber

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10 Copywriting Examples From History

Copywriters – Let’s have some fun today!

As I write this, it’s January 1, 2024

Happy New Year!

Remember though, we don’t need special dates or occassions to set resolutions and begin anew.

Now, right now, regardless of the day or date, is always the best time to start something new.

  • To start a career in copywriting.
  • To start a new ad campaign.
  • To brainstorm new ideas.

One of the best, fastest, and easiest ways to change our mindset for the better is to look at things, examine things, that have already been successful in the past. To learn from the past.

To stand on the shoulders of giants!

Today, I’m keepin’ it light. Pointing you in a direction. Giving you a glimpse of insight, inspiration, and hopefully intrigue.

Here are

10 Interesting Stories About Famous Copywriters and Their Memorable Ad Campaigns

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1. Claude Hopkins helped make toothbrushing a daily habit in the early 1900s with his campaign for Pepsodent toothpaste.

He invented the slogan, and a simple test anyone could do at home,  “Film on teeth”. to educate people about dental plaque. He emphasized Pepsodent’s minty flavor, which also made brushing your teeth feel refreshing. Other dental pastes did not have that minty tingle at the time, but were quick to adopt it based on Pepsodent’s success.

At the time Pepsodent commissioned Hopkins, only 7% of the population regularly brushed their teeth. Claude quickly determined that to sell more toothpaste, more people would need to become brushers. Within a decade, toothbrushing jumped from 7% to 65% among the American public. Claude Hopkins’ add campaign changed the daily habits and the oral health of an entire nation. He made himself and Pepsodent very rich in the process by focusing not just on the selling of toothpaste, but by solving the REAL problem – getting people to brush!

Claude Hopkins is widely recognized as a marketing genius. Most of us are not blessed with his natural ability to spot the “Real Problem” to solve. Luckily, The Copywriter’s Persuasion Toolkit does that for you!  With a few quick entries into the templates, it shows you the core pain points to address. Shows the quickest path to gain audience attention and the hot buttons you need to press to make the sale.

2. David Ogilvy‘s ad for Rolls-Royce in the 1950s simply showed the car with the headline “At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock.” It demonstrated the car’s quietness and luxury without overtly stating it. When the ad ran with that headline, readers couldn’t help but be curious to read the full ad copy.

3. Mary Wells Lawrence came up with the famous “Plop, plop, fizz, fizz” jingle for Alka-Seltzer in the 1960s. The catchy tune made the product memorable and sales increased by 300%. A catchy slogan, simple, repeatable and representative of the product is a great way for ads to go viral.

“Snap, Crackle, Pop” did this for Rice Crispies. “Where’s the beef?” did this for Wendy’s. The “Oscar Mayer has a way with B-O-L-O-G-N-A” jingle helped sell millions of dollars of cold cuts – and as a side benefit, taught kids the proper way to spell a word that most pronounce as baloney.

4. Bill Bernbach led the “Think Small” ad campaign for Volkswagen in the 1960s which openly addressed customers’ skepticism about the small VW Beetle. The honesty made the car appeal as an underdog against US gas-guzzling models. Bill Bernback produced a campaign of rebellion. His ads spoke to the needs and desires of all people who did not want or need the bloated sedans being put out by Detroit and others at the time. He spoke to the crowd that wanted less. Wanted simplicity. Wanted a car that would just go, even through the snow. To this crowd, he made the now iconic Volkswagen Beetle – the answer to their prayers.

5. Shirley Polykoff coined the slogan “Does she…or doesn’t she?” for Clairol hair dye in the 1950s. The provocative tagline about whether a woman dyed her hair or not  removed the shame a woman might have of being “discovered” and boosted sales. The “does she… or doesn’t she” cleverly implanted the idea that, if you used Clairol dye, nobody would ever know you colored your hair.(or discover it and embarrass you).

6. Leo Burnett‘s charming animated characters like the Jolly Green Giant and Tony the Tiger became beloved brand mascots. His Marlboro Man pitched filtered cigarettes as masculine, which helped flip public perception after women initially popularized menthol cigarettes.

Not Leo Burnett’s creation, but Geico is the more recent example of the power of creating a character to sell your brand. The cute, accented, green lizard is responsible for sellling a whole lot of insurance. The Energizer Bunny is another big one, selling batteries for Eveready.

7. Ted Bates helped turn Toni home permanents into the #1 hair styling choice in the 1940s by addressing women’s insecurities about beauty salon experiences in ads. This increased at-home hair styling adoption Ted was partner in the American advertising agency Ted Bates & Co.. with the more well-known creative  copywriter, Rosser Reeves.

8. Frances Gerety coined the slogan “A diamond is forever” in the 1940s for De Beers. By linking diamonds with romance and commitment, she cemented the stones as the definitive choice for engagement rings. Previous to this, colored stones such as rubies and emeralds were the prized possessions.

Contrary to popular belief, diamonds have never been in limited quantities, therefore more valuable by their scarcity. De Beers was created in order to restrict and artificially control the release of diamonds into the marketplace. Thus producing an artificial scarcity which continues to keep diamond prices high, even to this day.

9. Rosser Reeves promoted M&Ms by emphasizing they would not melt in one’s hands in 1954. This campaign targeted snackers and made the candy a handy, portable choice.The original milk chocolate M&M’s, the brainchild of Forrest Mars, were created in 1941 exclusively for U.S. service members deployed overseas during World War II. Chocolate bars were already part of military rations, but the M&M’s candy shell made them a standout.

At first they were sold in cardboard tubes and marketed to the military as a snack that could travel well in different climates. Many soldiers in World War II ate these candies. When the war ended, new markets for these candies became essential.

Rosser Reeves was creator of the much talked about USP (unique selling proposition). There’s a good article about Rosser Reeves’, his career, and his other famous ad campaigns here at: https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/rosser-reeves-his-unique-selling-proposition-ahmed-el-mahdy/

Rosser Reeves, strangely enough, was the brother-in-law of another famous copywriter, David Ogilvy.

10. David Ogilvy‘s iconic ads for Hathaway shirts featured an eye-patch wearing aristocrat. This unique imagery lent an air of intrigue and prestige to the shirts, overcoming their previously boring reputation. This ad campiagn came to life more or less on a whim of David to find something different.

On his way to work, the day of shooting the model for the shirt ads, David stopped at a discount store and grabbed a bunch of 50 cent eye patches. While watching the photographer work, he told him, “Humor me and shoot a few frames with these. Then I’ll get out of your hair so you can do the serious work.” The eye patches created a sense of curiosity and style about the man in the Hathaway shirt. Everyone had to have one. Inventories of this otherwise ordinary dress shirt were quickly depleted.

Great Ads Contain Secrets About Copywriting

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The study of great ads teaches us that we don’t have to reinvent the wheel every time we need to get somewhere. We can use the strategies, the tools, the techniques already invented, and proven to work, to create a version unique to our brand. Our thing. Our purpose.

People haven’t evolved that much in the last 100 years. The techniques to persuade and motivate in the past, still work today.

But technology has changed. Massively. We now have infinitely more ways to contact people, show ads to people, interact with people. And for far less cost; in many cases, even for free.

Geico didn’t invent “characters” as “brand ambassadors”. They just used (modeled, swiped) a technique already proven to work by Leo Burnett. And now they broadcast their message and gecko humor across dozens of media platforms reaching millions of prospective clients every year.

The Man in the Hathaway shirt idea has more recently been adopted by Dos Equis into “The Most Interesting Man in The World” for promotion in their beer commercials. Everyone wants to be interesting! Just like the men in those ads.

Imagine, if you buy their product, you will be interesting too!

It’s not logic that sells, it’s FEELINGS. And attention is captured by presenting someone the masses aspire to be. The Marlboro Man was another great example of presenting a character with traits men aspire to. To be strong, independent, free. A pioneer! A cowboy! Gotta get me some menthol smokes! Yikes!

In the spirit of keeping this light, fun, and inspirational for the New Year, I’ll wrap this up quickly by saying, you don’t have to be original, or particularly clever to market. You can simply stand on the shoulders of giants. Borrow their ideas. Adapt then to YOUR MARKET.

Arouse curiosity and intrigue.

Show them who they COULD BE if they would only buy your solution.

You could be a great copier. A great marketer.

And you could do it quickly and with only the slightest investment by standing on the shoulders of giants.

The Copywriter’ Persuasion Toolkit draws upon wisdom from the best master copywriters and sales psychologists of the past 100 years to put at your disposal, simple fill-in-the-blank cheat sheets, templates, and simple graphic illustrations to show you exactly what your prospects will respond to.

Work hard. Struggle. Be daringly original.

Or let the old proven masters guide you. And use a toolkit proven to work.

All the best to you.

May the New Year hold all the blessing you so richly deserve.

How else I can help you?

– Robert Schwarztrauber

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